It became an addiction. It helps to relax. Not a gym rat. But almost. Need to go everyday. Far away to have those extra big muscles. But the “legs day” are… horrible… It hurts a lot…

Thank you so much 😁

It is perfectly clear 😁

I have some work to do now…

Thank you so much. I am so happy for the feedback. First, I want to apologize for the lack of pages. When I split my PDF it showed me 20 but yeah… It counted the cover etc.

About: I’m not sure I’m going to articulate this properly, but the writing switches between narration (all knowing) and 3rd person POV a few times. What do you mean? I do not understand sorry :(

General question: Do you think it is important to know the age of the person? What I wanted to do/convey is: talking a bit less about physical trait of the characters but more about the mind, psyche of the characters. So, anyone can identify to the characters easily (if I “remove” the physical part ; including age). Maybe, it is too “conceptual”.

I must admit I have hard time with Mira. I wanted her to be the adventurer type the “Let’s do this ; let’s go” type but also she needs to forecast things like a planner type (If I can say like that) otherwise, she panics. But not so helpless like that lol That is ok. I will rework.

For the side questions. I laughed as yeah for me it made sense but for someone else… yeah… maybe not.

Thank you :) A summary (if you see something bad as hell you can put it in line comment) please so it is not eating up your time. Link: https://houseofoliviereu.com/download/2617/?tmstv=1747929217 (it is in PDF) You can be a bit direct I am ok with that and ready to hear it. Thank you so much, more than appreciated.

Greetings, The “you do you” is part of 😺’s nature. We do we. Humans do humans. We have still instinct from the Old times. The food was good but maybe too smelly. Need to hide it. Even though, there is no sand. Little rugs? In general, we love little things so that we can play. Dont forget to play with ur little ones! 😺