Instantnudel@feddit.org to ik_ihe@feddit.nl · 4 个月前ik😭ihefeddit.orgimagemessage-square20fedilinkarrow-up169arrow-down13
arrow-up166arrow-down1imageik😭ihefeddit.orgInstantnudel@feddit.org to ik_ihe@feddit.nl · 4 个月前message-square20fedilink
minus-squareInstantnudel@feddit.orgOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up5·4 个月前How dare you to insult the holy music :) Thanks for the Tips tho
minus-squareRednax@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·4 个月前The only other mistake I can spot is a tough. When you say “Ik bezoek de Thunderdome dit jaar”, I would have written “Ik ga de Thunderdome bezoeken dit jaar”. Consider the nuace in English between “I visit X” and “I will visit X”.
How dare you to insult the holy music :) Thanks for the Tips tho
The only other mistake I can spot is a tough. When you say “Ik bezoek de Thunderdome dit jaar”, I would have written “Ik ga de Thunderdome bezoeken dit jaar”.
Consider the nuace in English between “I visit X” and “I will visit X”.
Ah, dankjewel :)