• @diffcalculus@lemmy.world
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    601 year ago

    I like how the company-wide group text tidbit had nothing to do with the rest of the story.

    Reminded me of watching the extended cut of LoTR, where some scenes were just fluff.

    • The How™
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      421 year ago

      Yeah, I guess it reads weird. I think I intended it as a early barometer to his character, but didn’t expand or lampshade it properly. Oh well. It’s a lemmy comment, not a graded CW essay.